高考英语读后续写必背：续写提分赋能16大经典句式

日期：2023-10-23 13:40 点击：

句式1：With +复合结构”又称为“with结构”

At the thought of the fact that she didn’t have lucky spikes, she felt more anxious with her heart beating fast and her feet sweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，脚出汗。

Thrilled and joyful, Jodie hugged her teammates tightly with tears rolling down her face.Jodie 激动而高兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。

1. 那女孩张大了嘴巴，打开了她的礼物盒。(with +宾语+adj.open)

2. 女孩心怦怦直跳（beat wildly），打开（unwrap）了她的礼物盒。(with +宾语+分词)

3. 他的妻子伤心极了，眼里满是泪水（full of tears/filled with tears）

4. 那个人躺在地上，双手颤抖着。（on the ground, tremble）

The girl unwrapped the gift box with her mouth wide open.

The girl unwrapped the gift box with her heart beating wildly.

His wife was extremely sad, with eyes full of tears / with tears rolling down her face

句式2 ：并列谓语，细化动作 A, B and C

When the announcer said “Next up is the girls’ 100-meter hurdles”, Jodie took a deep breath and walked to the starting line slowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时，朱迪深吸一口气，慢慢地走到起跑线上。

句式3 ：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示动作伴随，原因或结果

Jodie wore her brand-new spikes, waiting for her turn nervously and anxiously. Jodie穿着她崭新的钉子，紧张不安地等待着轮到她。

句式4 巧用生动的无灵主语： A strong/intense sense of delight took hold of me the moment I heard the news.

描述心情的名词 happiness/joy/delight 开心 anger/rage/fury 狂怒 sadness/sorrow 悲伤 gratitude/appreciation 感激 admiration 钦佩/赞赏 guilt/remorse  愧疚悔恨 fear/terror/fright/panic 害怕 astonishment/shock/surprise 震惊

动词 seize catch (caught过去式) strike (struck 过去式) surround take hold of wash over come over

+sb.

句式5 ：情感形容词+句子

Relieved(=breathing a sigh of relief), Eric thanked the man and switched the frequency back, “Mac, help is coming!” But there was no response.埃里克松了一口气，向那个人表示感谢，并将频率调回，“麦克，救命来了！”但没有回应。

Thrilled and joyful, Jodie hugged her teammates tightly with tears rolling down her face.Jodie 激动而高兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。

句式6：巧用时间状语，表达情节

After what seemed like a century, Eric heard another voice. It was Slide Mountain Rescue who finally came!好像经历了一个世纪之后，埃里克听到了另一个声音。终于来了，是雪山救援队！

句式7：. “一……就……”的表达法：as soon as, hardly/scarcely…when…, no sooner… than…, the moment/minute/second/instant, immediately/instantly/directly, on/upon+n.doing。

The moment the announcer announced “Number 11, Jodie Nymble, takes the gold for Riverside Middle School”,thunderous cheers and laughter filled the Hidden Park. 当播音员宣布“11号，Jodie Nymble，为Riverside Middle School夺金”的那一刻,雷鸣般的欢呼和笑声充满了 Hidden Park.

句式8：巧用“某人想到”:

At the thought of the fact that she didn’t have lucky spikes, she felt more anxious with her heart beating fast and her feet sweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，脚出汗。

句式9 ：主句，which从句（定语从句）

格式：_______主句________, which 第二句话;

例句：玛丽打开门看到了小女孩，她有着令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的头发Mary opened the door and saw the little girl，who had familiar eyes and black hair

结构2：格式：_______主句________, which enable/ forced/ allowed sb to do; _______主句________, which made/forced/allowed sb 感情词

例句：就在这时，我们听到了Uncle Paul远处传来的微弱声音，这重新点燃了我们回家的希望。

Just at the moment, we heard the faint voice in the distance from Uncle Paul, which allowed us to light the hope returning home.

句式10 ：描写气氛或者氛围的句子。（情感词+ fill +地点）

Worry and anxiety filled the air.空气中弥漫着忧虑和焦虑。

句式11：关于情感句子的积累:(表达情感的形容词+动作具体描写),用so…that

Jodie was so excited and refreshed that she yelled out “My lucky spikes”.朱迪非常兴奋，神清气爽，她大叫“我的幸运钉”。

1.兴奋:I was so excited/thrilled that I gave a jump in the air.我动得跳了起来

2.开心：I was so happy/cheerful that I jumped up and down.我高兴得上跑下跳

3.感动: I was so moved that I failed to say a word.我感动得一句话也说不出来

4.悲伤: I was so sad that I hid my face in my hands我难受得用手捂住了脸。

5.(生气)I was so angry that I failed to say a word我气得一句话也说不出。

6.（害怕） I was so scared/frightened that my palms sweated and my heart pounded.

我害怕得手心汗,心怦怦直跳。

7.（羞愧） I was so ashamed that I could feel my face burning.我羞愧得感觉自己的脸在燃烧。

升级 倒装 

So shocked was I that I was frozen to the spot the moment I heard the news.(当我听到消息时候，我太震惊了以至于呆在原地)

句式12：副词修饰动词或句子

（1）Jodie wore her brand-new spikes, waiting for her turn nervously and anxiously. Jodie穿着她崭新的钉子，紧张不安地等待着轮到她。

（2）When the announcer said “Next up is the girls’ 100-meter hurdles”, Jodie took a deep breath and walked to the starting line slowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时，朱迪深吸一口气，慢慢地走到起跑线上。

（3）Thrilled and joyful, Jodie hugged her teammates tightly with tears rolling down her face.Jodie 激动而高兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。

句式13：倒装或强调

Not until then did Jodie realize that luck would always favor her as long as she spared no effort to do it.直到那时，朱迪才意识到，只要她不遗余力地去做，运气总是会眷顾她。

呼应主题常用句式

直到...才....	(1) 倒装句：not until+时间状语 did sb realize that+主题从句 (2) 强调句：it was only then that sb realized that+主题从句
还记得某人的话， 某人的话还在脑海中	One’s words echoed/ rang out in one’s ears that+主题

My teacher’s encouraging words still echoed/ lingered/ rang out in my ears, bringing me a glimmer/ ray/ beam of hope.

It was my mother who taught us to hold a positive attitude to life.

是我的妈妈一直教导我们要对困难保持乐观的态度

It was love that makes the world go around.

正是爱让/使这个世界运转起来

She said that it was my company and encouragement that not only made her happy but also improved her confidence.(她说正是我的陪伴和鼓励不仅使我快乐而且提高了我的信心）

句式14  独立主格结构

She took money with shaking hands, tears welling up in her eyes. 

句式15 名词性从句

主语从句

结构1：It is +adj for sb that…

结构2：what I could do/say/… is to

what (counts/matters/impress me) most is that … =it is important that…

What make me anxious is that >>>>

功能：用于突出某个动作的重要或必须

应用位置：不限

例句1：我们能做的就是慢慢沿着原路回去。

What we could do was to go back along the previous track.

例句2：我所看到的与我过去所经历的任何事情完全不同。

What I saw was completely unlike anything I had experienced in the past.

句式16 【毫不犹豫/迫不及待做某事】

1、Withoutdelay/ hesitation/ a second thought

2、Could not/ hardly wait to do sth

【例句】

1、在一个下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那个年轻人毫不犹豫/迟疑地跳进水里，伸手去够我儿子。

Ona snowy winter morning with the freezing/ bitterly cold water, the young man jumped into the river without delay/ hesitation/ a second thought, reaching for my son.

2、我迫不及待地想把这个好消息告诉妈妈。

Icould hardly wait to inform my mother of this good news.