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以My Family’s Mid-autumn Day为题目,写一篇不少于80词的短文。
内容提示:
(1)介绍中秋节和中秋节日期。
(2)介绍中秋节的传统食品和过节方式。
(3)你的家人们一起过中秋节的情景。
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My Family’s Mid-autumn Day
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假设Michael是你的美国朋友,他想了解中国的传统节日——中秋节。请根据内容要点给他写一封邮件。
内容:
1.重要性;
2.传统活动及食物;
3.意义。
要求:
1.内容完整,字迹工整,表达通顺;
2.词数不少于80,邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Michael,
I heard that you want to know about the Mid-Autumn Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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假如你是初二的学生李华,你们学校正在开展中国传统文化的社会实践课活动,你想向你校的英国交换生Peter介绍一下庆祝今年中秋节的计划。请用英文写一封电子邮件,告诉他你将和谁一起庆祝今年的中秋节,你们将如何庆祝。
提示词语:celebrate (庆祝), mooncakes, solve riddles on lanterns, culture
提示问题:
●Who will you celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival with?
●What will you do during the festival?
Dear Peter,
How is it going? The Mid-Autumn Festival is an important festival in China and it will be on September 21st this year. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Are you interested in it? I really hope you can come and celebrate this festival with us.
Yours,
Li Hua
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假设你是王涛,你的美国笔友(Peter)对中国文化很感兴趣,他写信向你询问中国的传统节日中秋节(the Mid-Autumn Festival)的习俗。请你根据下面的提示,写一封回信。
内容要点:
(1)When is it celebrated?
(2)What do people usually do during the festival?
(3)What do you think of the festival?
要求:
(1)包括提示中所有要点,可适当发挥。
(2)语句通顺、语意连贯,文中不要出现真实的人名和校名。
(3)词数80左右(回信的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:农历Chinese lunar calendar
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear from you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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爱老敬老是我国优秀的传统文化之一。在庆祝建党100周年之际,你校将举办以“献礼建党百年,讲好中国故事,弘扬中国文化”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假设你是李华,请从我国传统节日(例如Spring festival, Dragon Boat Festival, Double Ninth Day, Mid-autumn Festival等)中选择一个节日作为你的演讲内容进行介绍。
(1)开场问候及自我介绍;
(2)节日名称及其活动内容和意义;
(3)这个节日带给你的感受。
注意:(1)文章不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;(2)可适 当增加细节,使行文连贯,80词左右。
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参考答案:
1.例文:
My Family’s Mid-autumn Day
Mid-autumn Day is a Chinese traditional festival. It falls on the 15th day of August in the lunar calendar. Chinese people usually get together to celebrate it at home. On that evening they eat moon cakes, dumplings and some fruits. They also watch the moon outside their houses.
I like Mid-autumn Day very much. On that day we always go to my grandparents’ house. So do my uncles and aunts. We celebrate it there. All of us usually take something delicious to my grandparents. They are always very glad to see us. Then we eat moon cakes and watch the moon together. At that time everyone is very happy. I love all of my family. I love Mid-autumn Day.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于材料作文写作,要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文,谈谈你家如何过中秋节。注意写作时要点要齐全,同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时;写作时,注意承接上文,根据要点提示具体介绍介绍中秋节和中秋节日期,中秋节的传统食品和过节方式以及你的家人们一起过中秋节的情景;文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点;可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩;注意单词书写的准确度,语法运用的准确度,上下文注意连接的流畅度,以及逻辑合理。
2.例文
Dear Michael,
I heard that you want to know about the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on lunar August 15th of a year. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. On this day, people often get together to have a big dinner with their families. At night, people often enjoy admiring the moon and eat all kinds of delicious mooncakes in the open air. Mooncakes carry people’s wishes to the families they love. Some people don’t come back home until midnight.
This is the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. I hope you’ll like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:本题是写一封邮件,根据要点提示介绍中国的传统节日——中秋节。
2.写作指导:本文时态用一般现在时,人称主要用第三人称;短文可分为三段式,首先开篇点题;然后具体介绍中秋节的重要性、传统活动和食物,以及意义;最后总结和表达希望。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法使用错误。
3.例文:
Dear Peter,
How is it going? The Mid-Autumn Festival is an important festival in China and it will be on September 21st this year. In order to celebrate this festival, we will get together with all our family members. We will clean the house and have a big dinner. We will also eat mooncakes. They are delicious. What’s more, it’s very interesting to solve riddles on lanterns. On that day, the moon is round and bright, so it is good for us to enjoy it.
Are you interested in it? I really hope you can come and celebrate this festival with us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:本题要求以李华的身份,根据提示内容写一封电子邮件给英国交换生Peter,内容包括:你将和谁一起庆祝今年的中秋节,你们将如何庆祝。
2.写作指导:本文时态主要采用一般将来时和一般现在时;写作时应承接开头和结尾,紧扣提示内容进行发挥;写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全,行文流畅,语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
4.例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. It falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together, eat mooncakes, and share our stories.
I think this festival is very meaningful. For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.
Yours,
Wang Tao
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。向笔友Peter介绍中秋节。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时。分为两段式:第一段介绍中秋节在什么时候以及中秋节人们所做的事情;第二段发表自己对中秋节的看法。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
5.例文:
My favorite festival
Hello, everyone. My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the important traditional festivals in China. It falls on August 15 in the lunar calendar. On that day, almost everyone gets together with his or her family, eating mooncakes, chatting and admiring the moon. Everyone is very happy on the Mid-Autumn night.
I remembered that on the Mid-Autumn Festival last year, my English teacher, my classmates and I had a meaningful party in the classroom. Our teacher gave each of us a mooncake which she bought two days before when it rained heavily. In order to keep the mooncakes dry, she was all wet when she got to school. Our teacher gave all of her love to us! At the party, we ate the mooncakes happily. We were all happy and exciting!
【详解】1.题干解读:这篇作文要求考生根据提示的内容要点,写一个演讲稿介绍一个中国的传统节日,属于讲稿写作。
2.写作指导:审题可知,这篇作文需用第一、三人称,以一般现在时和一般过去时两种时态展开叙述。写作中要按照提示的要点,首先作自我介绍,然后介绍自己最喜欢的节日名称(中秋节)和习俗,再结合切身经历叙述过中秋节的情景,最后谈一谈感受。行文时注意主谓一致和上下文的过渡,符合逻辑关系,保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
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