高考英语：读后续写公式

第一部分 语言描写

一、正确使用标点符号

(1)说话人+说话内容

“说”后用逗号， 引号内第一个字母大写，句尾标点符号放在引号内。

He said,“You are my best friend!”

(2) 说话内容+说话人

陈述句引号内用逗号， 引号外第一个字母小写：疑问句或感叹句引号内用问号或感叹号， 引号外第一个字母小写。且“某人说”可以写作“sb.said”也可以写作“said sb.”。

① "Yes," he said.

②"You may both go," said Andy.

③"Don't move," she said to Mike in a soft voice.

(3)说话内容+说话人+说话内容

“某人说”可以写作“sb.said”也可以写作“said sb.”:

“某人说”前面引号内用逗号，引号外第一个字母小写。

“某人说”后面如果用句号，则后面引号内第一个字母大写；

“某人说”后面如果用逗号，则后面引号内第一个字母小写。

①“That's cool,”he said.“Can I have a try?”

②“You'd better let me go,”teased her twin brother, William.“There are dangers all over this place.”

③“You can go any place you want,”Amy said,“but I think you'll find what you need.”

二、避免重复使用 say

在进行语言描写时很多同学全部都只用“said”这一个单词，这样使得句子重复呆板，因此要学会灵活多变的各种“说”。

explain 解释

state 陈述

protest 抗议

sob哭诉

insist 坚持

comfort安慰

repeat 重复

agree同意

order命令

scream 尖叫

promise承诺

whisper 耳语

yell/shout 大叫

declare 声称

add 补充

assure 保证

complain 抱怨

apologise 道歉

announce 宣告

argue 争论

interrupt 打断

beg 请求

demand 要求

mock 嘲讽

claim 声称

cry/exclaim 喊叫

suggest/advise 建议

stammer/stutter/stumble 结巴

ask /inquire 询问

reply/answer/respond回答

1.“Christine !照顾好你弟弟!”母亲高声喊道。

“Christine! Take care of your young brother!”Mother shouted at the top of her voice.

2.“Hannah，你知道她在哪儿吗?她怎么样?请告诉我。”他恳求道。

"Hannah, do you know where she is? How is she? Please tell me."He begged.

3.“报纸上有一个圣诞愿望竞赛。”Amy的妈妈宣布，“给圣诞老人写封信可能会得奖。”

“There's a Christmas wish con test on the newspaper,”Amy's mom announced.“Write a letter to Santa, and you might win a prize.”

三、如何让对话更生动

第一类

“……,”sb said in a …voice/tone.某人以…的声音、 语气说到

in a pleasant tone/voice 以一种愉悦的声音/语气

in a firm tone/voice以一种坚定的声音/语气

in a rude tone/voice以一种粗鲁的声音/语气

in a sad tone/voice 以一种悲伤的声音/语气

也可以用 in a voice/tone of+名词的搭配

in a tone/voice of surprise 用一种惊讶的语气

in a tone/voice of curiosity 用一种好奇的语气

in a tone/voice of impatience 用一种不耐烦的语气

in a tone/voice of command用一种命令的语气

1.“你一定是安妮吧?”他用友好的语气说。

“You must be Annie,”he said in a friendly tone.

2.“我很乐意。”艾米莉用愉快的语气说。

“I would love to.”said Emily in a pleasant tone.

3.“我不想和你一起去。”艾米丽用不耐烦的语气说。

“I don't want to go with you.”said Emily in a tone of impatience.

4.“不，我没有告诉他这个秘密。”他用低沉的语调说.

“No, I didn’t tell him the secret.”he said in a low tone.

第二类

“xxx,”sb said in/with+心情类名词.某人以…的心情说道……

1.“You are safe,”Tom cried with excitement.

“你安全啦！”Tom 激动地说道。

2.“I hate you!”she screamed in anger.

“我讨厌你！”她生气地大喊道。

3.“What a lovely rabbit,”I said in astonishment.

“好可爱的兔子啊！”我诧异地说到。

4.“Nice to meet you,”he said with enthusiasm.

“很高兴认识你。”他热情地说。

第三类

“xxx,”sb said +adv..+doing.(添加非谓语动词表达后续动作)

1.“我去给我们拿点咖啡。”她温柔地说道，朝厨房走去。

“I'll get us some coffee,” she said gently, heading for the kitchen.

2.“我再也不相信你了。”他生气地大喊道，砰的一声关上门。

“I don't believe you anymore.”He yelled angrily, slamming the door.

3.“我被狼袭击了，我以为再也见不到你了。”麦克激动地说，紧紧抱住他们。

“I was attacked by a wolf and I thought I would never see you again.”Mike said excitedly.hugging them tightly.

第四类

sb did sth.did sth and said“xxx.” (添加动作链)

1.他拦下出租车， 提着行李箱跳上车， 对司机说："请去警察局。"

He stopped the taxi, jumped in with the suitcase and told the driver.“Go to the police station,please.”

2.她冲上前去，跪在地上，喃喃地说：“对不起，我的宝贝。”

She dashed forward.knelt down and murmured," I'm sorry, my baby.”

3.我匆忙穿上衣服，拿起包说：“请等一下我！”

I put on my clothes hurriedly, grabbed my bag and said."Please wait for me!"

Translation

1.“没人能理解我！”安迪哽咽着， 双手掩面。

“Nobody could understand me!”Andy sobbed, burying his face in his hands.

2.农夫抱起狗，跪下来，轻声说：“现在是你的了。”

The farmer picked up the dog, knelt down and said in a soft voice,“It's yours now.”

3.她眼里噙着泪水说：“对不起。”

With tears in her eves, she said,“Sorry.”

4.“嗨， 兰迪。我对意大利面条的事感到抱歉。”凯瑟琳低声道歉， 脸涨红了。

“Hi, Landy.I'm sorry about the spaghetti thing.”Catherine murmured an apology, her face reddening.

5.“看！”罗斯指着窗户，激动地喊道。

“Look!”Rose pointed out the window and cried in great excitement.

6.“想试一下吗?”我抚摸着玛丽娜的手说。

“Want to try one on?”I said, touching Marina's hand.

7.我打开窗户对着对面喊道。“我知道我们以前见过面， 但我不记得在哪里了。”。

I opened my window and shouted across,“I know we've met before, but I can't remember where.”

8.“想试一下吗?”我抚摸着玛丽娜的手说。

“Want to try one on?”I said, touching Marina's hand.

第二部分 结尾升华

一、分类

1、氛围结尾:

floated in the air/filled +地点/…was bathed in“飘在空中/充满/沉浸在”

(1) The golden sun light streaming in, laughter lingered around the yard and happiness floated in the air.

(2) With the cool breeze, the whole family was bathed in happiness and love.

2、拥抱哭泣对话法

A hugged B tightly with tears flowing down one's cheeks, whispering...

母亲给了我们每个人一个大大的拥抱，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来，在我们耳边低语：“谢谢你们的好意。是你的爱温暖了我们。

The mother hugged us tightly with tears flowing down her cheeks, whispering in our ears,“Thank you for your kindness.It's your love that has warmed us up.”

3.强调句:

It is+名词+that+谓语(count/matter/bring...)“正是…”

正是爱和关怀使世界运转。

It is love and care that make the world go around.

4.From then on, “从那时起, ……”

从那时起，我总是尽可能地帮助别人。

From then on, I always give others a helping hand if possible.

从那时起，友谊在我们两人的心中绽放。

From then on friendship bloomed in both of our hearts.

5.Only then did sb.realize that…“直到那时某人才意识到…”

直到那时我才意识到，我们不应该把爱视为理所当然。

Only then did I realized that we should never take love for granted.

6.It occurred to sb.that…“某人突然想到…”

他突然想到，有了家人的爱，过生日就不再是烦恼了。

It occurred to him that with family's love, it was no longer disturbing to have birthday.

7.Many years have passed, but I will never forget ...“许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记…”

许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记那份特别的礼物。

Many years have passed, but I will never forget the special gift.

8.Many years have passed, but the experience is still deeply engraved in one's mind.

许多年过去了，但这段经历仍深深地铭刻在一个人的脑海里。

9.Never had sb.done sth.“某人从来没有…”

她从来没有这么骄傲过！

Never had she been so proud!

二、精彩结尾赏析

亲情类

1.The Mother hugged the twins tightly, whispering,“This is the best surprise in the world!”

2.Only then did I realized that how much my mom loved me.

3.It occurred to me that family love is the greatest gift in life.

4.It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family.

5.It was at this very moment that the frozen ice between two generations ——melted down into a warm stream flowing into their hearts.

6.The early sunlight streaming in, laughter lingered around the room and happiness floated in the air/the whole family was bathed in happiness and love.

7.After so many years, the taste of the cake, the laughter of friends and the embrace of my parents still lingered in my mind.

= the taste of the cake, the laughter of friends and the embrace of my parents were still deeply engraved in my mind.

8.This birthday is bound to be kept in my memory forever,lightening my future path.

助人类

1.有时候，我们小小的行动可以给别人带来很大的不同。

Sometimes our small action can make a great difference to others.

2.许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记玛格丽特的圣诞礼物和她的善举。

Many years have passed, but I will never forget Margret's Christmas gifts and her act of kindness.

2.母亲给了我们每个人一个大大的拥抱，在我们的眼中低语：“谢谢你们的好意。是你的爱温暖了我们。”

The mother gave each of us a big hug, whispering in our eyes,“Thank you for your kindness.It's your love that has warmed us up.”

3.我突然想到，一个简单的举动可以让世界变得更美好。

It occurred to me that a simple act could make the world so much better.

5.虽然外面的风还在呼啸，但一股暖流涌上心头。

Although the wind still screamed outside, a warm current rose in my heart.

个人成长类(逆境、积极向上)

1.在你身上发生了什么并不重要，重要的是你如何应对。

It's not what happens to you, but how you react to it that matters.

2.直面困难，努力。你终将制造奇迹。

Be brave, rise to setbacks, and make efforts.You will end up creating miracles.

3.恐惧缔造不了未来，但希望可以。

Fear never builds the future, but hope does.

4.每个人都像一朵花，有的有香味，有的没有。只要你开花，就会有蜜蜂和蝴蝶。

Everyone is like a flower, some having fragrance, but some not.As long as you bloom, there will be bees and butterflies.

5.要把最坏的情况变成最好的情况，一个人应该采取行动。

To change the worst situation into best, one should take actions.

6.正如谚语所说，永远不会失败。我要么赢，要么学习。

Just as a saying goes,“Never lose.I either win or learn.”

7.成功之路并不平坦。它充满了挑战和困难。

The journey to success is not smooth.It is full of challenges and difficulties.

个人成长类(梦想)

1.这是真的：如果梦想足够大， 事实并不重要。

It's true: If the dream is big enough, the facts don't count.

2.任何一个有梦想，有勇气和毅力的人都会成功。

Anyone with a dream, courage and persistence will be successful.

3.成为你可能成为的人永远都不晚。

Only then did I realized that it's never too late to be all you can possibly be.

4.人类历史上最伟大的发现是一个人可以通过改变他的态度来改变他的未来。

The greatest discovery of all time is that a person can change his future by merely changing his attitude.

5.你无法控制他人的行为，但你可以选择如何应对。

You cannot control the behavior of others, but you can always choose how you respond to it.

脱险类

1.多么死里逃生啊！

What a narrow escape!

2.每当我回想起那次惊心动魄的经历，我仍然会感到一种强烈的恐惧感。

I would still feel a strong sense of fear whenever I looked back on the thrilling experience.

3.事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，任何困境都是有出路的。

It turned out that there is always a way out of any difficult situations as long as we stay calm.

4.我从来没有陷入过这样危险的境地。这段经历深深地刻在了我的脑海里，提醒我要尊重自然。

Never had I fallen into such a dangerous situation.The experience was deeply engraved in my mind and reminded me to respect the nature.