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英语提分最快的就是英语作文了,高考英语作文只要掌握一些万能的模板,在高考英语考生的时候练好英文书写,就能得到不错的分数。
纵观近几年高考英语写作,十有八九都是考书信,尤其是全国卷,因此,对书信写作的备考一定要提上日程。
今天,小编为大家整理了八种信件写作的实用金句和满分范文,用在英语作文里会增色加分不少。快快抓紧时间多储备几个吧!高一、高二和高三的同学全部适用哦!
01
邀请信
No.1 金句记诵
① I am writing to invite you to ... / I’m writing to tell you that there will be a ...我写信邀请你…… / 我写信告诉你将有……
② I am very pleased to invite you to participate in ... to be held from ... to ... in ...我很高兴邀请你参加从……到……在……举行的……
③ I have been admiring your deep appreciation of ... and wondering whether you will be so kind as to guide us on ...我一直很欣赏您对……的深刻理解,不知道您能否给我们介绍一下……
④ I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in ...我想你要是能来参加……那就太好了
⑤ It is my pleasure / a great honor for me to invite you to ...能邀请你参加……是我(莫大)的荣幸。
⑥ If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.如果你感兴趣,告诉我,我会给你发送更多的信息。
⑦Sorry for occupying your spare time, but we do hope you could join us and give us some advice.很抱歉占用了您的时间,但我们真的希望您能加入我们,给我们一些建议。
⑧ I am sure you will have a good time at ...我相信你在……将会玩得开心。
⑨ Here are some details about this activity. / The following are some details about this activity. / Some details about this activity are as follows.本次活动的一些细节内容如下。
No.2 佳作赏析
假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:
1. 球队活动;
2. 报名方式及截止日期。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
How’s everything going? The table-tennis team of our school is admitting new players. I’m sure it will appeal to you, for you have been enthusiastic about sports. Therefore, I’d like to invite you to join the team. Now the information in detail.
The team will hold a range of activities, including some training and matches. And some world-famous players will be invited to give lessons. If you are interested in it, you may either send an email to 123456@sina.com or sign up in person. The deadline is June 25th, 2017. I sincerely hope you could join us. Don’t hesitate to ask me if you have any questions.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的埃里克,
一切都好吗?我们学校的乒乓球队正在招收新队员。我相信这一定很吸引你,因为你一直热衷于体育运动。因此,我想邀请你加入我们的团队。详情如下。
该队将举行一系列活动,包括一些训练和比赛。还会邀请一些世界著名的运动员来授课。如果你有兴趣,可以发邮件到123456@sina.com或亲自报名。截止日期是2017年6月25日。我真诚地希望你能加入我们。如果你有任何问题,尽管问我。
期待你的早日回复。
你的
李华
02
询问/回复信
No.1 金句记诵
① I am writing to ask for more information about it.我写信来询问更多关于它的消息。
② There are some pieces of information that I'd like to share with you.有一些消息我想要和你分享。
③ The most significant thing you should keep in mind is that…你需要记住的最重要的事情是......
No.2 佳作赏析
假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
ENJOY A RELAXING STUDY BREAK
IN BEAUTIFUL LANCASTER
-----------------------------------------
LANGUAGE CENTRE AND COLLEGE OF ARTS
UNIVERSITY OF LANCASTER
Languages* English * French * Spanish
Arts* Politics * Sociology * History
3wk, 6wk and 12wk courses
***
Reasonable fees
***
Accommodation service
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I've seen your ad, and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English courses.
First, when will the course start and how many Class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.
Would there be host family or university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
03
请求/求助信
No.1 金句记诵
① I would be very grateful if you could… 如果您能……我将感激不尽。
② I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.如您能帮助我,我将感激不尽。
③Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.谢谢您的关注,期待收到您尽早的回复。
④ If you need further information, do let me know.如您需要更多的信息,请告知我。
No.2 佳作赏析
假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I’m writing to ask for your help. I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used. I know you have a very busy schedule, and I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.
Thank you for your kindness!
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的詹金斯女士,
我是上学期上您英语写作课的李华。我写信来请求您的帮助。我正在申请暑假期间在我所在城市的一家外企做兼职,我刚刚完成了我的求职信和简历。然而,我不太确定我所使用的语言和格式。我知道您的日程安排得很紧,所以如果您能花点时间检查一下,并做些必要的修改,我将不胜感激。附件是我的申请信和简历,请查收。
谢谢您的好意!
你的
李华
04
申请/求职信
No.1 金句记诵
① I sincerely hope that my application could be favorably considered.我真诚地希望我的申请会被考虑。
② The ad is really very appealing to me, so I'm now writing to you in the hope of filling in the job vacancy.这则广告非常吸引我,所以我写信给您希望能够填补这个职位的空缺。
③ I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because…我真的希望得到这次珍贵的机会,因为......
No.2 佳作赏析
假定你是李华,从互联网 (the Internet) 上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore) 举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力);2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3. 希望获准。
Dear Sir or Madam
The other day I happened to read your advertisement on the Internet, saying that you are holding a summer camp aimed at students from around the world, and I'm interested to participate in it.
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student in China. As a teenager, I'm interested in making friends with kids of my age from around the world. Your camp will provide a good chance for me to know a lot about other countries and tell them something about China. What's more, I can improve my English, communicating with people from other countries.
I do hope that I can be lucky enough to be admitted to your camp.
Looking forward to your reply.
Regards,
Li Hua
05
建议信
No.1 金句记诵
① Almost perfect as it is, it should make more improvement in some area.虽然它近乎完美,但是它在一些方面也需要改进。
② And I've found that my problem lies chiefly in two aspects. For one thing, …For another thing, …我发现我的问题主要在于两个方面。一方面,…... 另一方面, …...
③ I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.我相信,有了老师和学生的共同努力,我们学校会在不久的将来成为一个更令人快乐的地方。
No.2 佳作赏析
假定你是李华,你所喜爱的 Global Mirror 周报正值创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:1. 说明你是该报的忠实读者;2. 赞赏该报优点1) 兼顾国内外新闻2) 介绍名人成功故事;3. 提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章。
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
06
感谢/祝福信
No.1 金句记诵
① I'm writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude to you for teaching me the English song.我写信来达对你教我英文歌的衷心感谢!
② Without your help, the performance couldn't have been that successful.没有您的帮助,表演不会有那么成功。
③ I'd like to express my thanks for your hospitality and kindness when | was in America.我想感谢您对我在美国时的好客和友好。
④ In addition, what has impressed me most is…而且,最让我感动的是......
No.2 佳作赏析
假定你是李华,从小喜爱大熊猫 (panda),一直通过有关网站 (website)关注三年前在美国圣地亚哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信:1. 自我介绍;2. 祝贺苏琳生日;3. 感谢工作人员;4. 要苏琳三岁生日照片
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
This is Li Hua, a student in China. I've been fond of pandas since my childhood. Since three years ago, when the panda Baiyun gave birth to a baby panda Sulin, I have been visiting your website to keep myself informed about how things are going for them. If I remember clearly, she will turn three soon. I want to say happy birthday to her and express my thanks to you for your hard work, with which she has been brought up and has been living happily with her parents in the US.
By the way, I wonder if I could have a photo taken of Sulin on her third birthday. Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
07
投诉信
No.1 金句记诵
① Taking into account all three factors above, I request that the company should have a change of it for me as soon as possible.考虑到以上的三个因素,我要求公司要为我尽快换一个新的。
② But we are regretful to find that it cannot work normally.但是,我们很遗憾地发现它不能正常地工作。
③ Your prompt attention and early reply will be appreciated.感谢您即时的关注和及早的回复。
④ I am waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply.我在等待一个合理的解释,并期待及早回复。
No.2 佳作赏析
假如你是李华,昨天在商场购买了一台电风扇,回家后发现它不能运转。你回到店里与营业员交涉时,该营业员对你的态度恶劣,对你提出的问题不予受理。请你为此向经理写一封投诉信。
Dear Manager,
I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint.
Yesterday I bought an electric fan in your shop, but when I got home and turned it on, it didn't work. So I took it back and talked to the assistant about the problem. To my surprise, instead of helping me solve the problem, the man, in a rude manner, refused to examine it.
Generally, your shop is well-known for good service and that is why I bought the electric fan in your shop. I was really upset to find that such a thing should have occurred in your shop.
I am waiting for a reasonable explanation and expecting an early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
08
道歉信
No.1 金句记诵
① I am sorry to tell you about some changes.我很抱歉地告诉你一些变化。
② I’m terribly sorry to tell you that ... / I regret to inform you that ...我非常抱歉地告诉你…… / 我很遗憾地通知你…
③ I am not be able to do ... as planned / scheduled / arranged.我不能按原计划 / 计划 / 安排 ……
④ I apologize for the inconvenience I have caused.我为我造成的不便道歉。
⑤ Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology for ...请接受我对……最真诚和最深切的歉意。
⑥ I wish I could be given a chance to make up for my inconsideration.我希望我能有机会弥补我的疏忽。
No.2 佳作赏析
假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 说明原因;
3. 另约时间。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的鲍勃,
很抱歉,星期五下午我不能和你一起去书店了。我刚发现我那天下午要参加一个重要的班会。我希望这个变动不会给你带来太多的麻烦。
我们星期六上午去好吗?我们可以早点出发,这样我们就有更多的时间来读书和选书。如果你方便的话,我们8点半在校门口见。如果不方便,请告诉我什么时间对你最合适。下周放学后我随时都有空。
你的
李华
思源教育(原上海交大思源进修学院,简称思源教育)成立于1996年,自建校以来,秉承交大校训,依托名校师资,提供专业的托班辅导、青少年英语辅导、小学辅导、初中辅导、高中辅导、高考高复、三校生高复、艺考生文化课等,学生遍及全市各区,至今已帮助六万多余名学子取得优异成绩,成功考入理想的各级院校!20余年来思源已成为“中考教学研究中心”、“中学个性化学习教育基地”、“快速学习法”实验学校。