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一 分类写作指导
人物类作文一 我自己 Myself
要涉及的话题或句型:
一、姓名 My name is Wang Xiaoming. /I’m Wang Xiaoming. /This is Wang Xiaoming.注意名字有两个字时,要连在一起,只大写第一个字 如王小明 Wang Xiaoming
二、年龄 I’m twelve/I’m twelve years old.
三、喜欢的食物水果与运动/功课等等
My favourite fruit/food is …..I like playing badminton.Because it’s good for my body.
四 经常在何时做运动或爱好
I often play badminton with my classmates after school.
五 家人
There are three people in my family:my father,mother and I.
六 家人职业及爱好(简略)
My father is an engineer.He likes reading books. He often asks me to go to the library with him.
七 结束语
I love my father.And I love my family.This is me.
人物类作文二 我的朋友 My friend
与Myself的区别: 主语由I 变He/She.动词由动词原形变为动词第三人称单数形式.代词由my 变his/her
要涉及的话题或句型:开头句 I have a friend
一、姓名 His name is Wang Xiaoming. /He’s Wang Xiaoming. /注意名字有两个字时,要连在一起,只大写第一个字 如王小明 Wang Xiaoming
二、年龄 He’s twelve/He’s twelve years old.
三、喜欢的食物水果与运动/功课等等
His favourite fruit/food is ….. He likes playing badminton. Because it’s good for his body.
四、经常在何时做运动或爱好 He often plays badminton with me after school.
五、家人 There are three people in his family:his father,mother and he.
六、家人职业及爱好(简略) His father is an engineer.He likes reading books.
七、结束语 I like my friend.
作文三 我的一天 My day
时态:一般现在时
重要句型:主语+动词原形+其它.
I get up at 6:00.Then I wash my face and brush my teeth.I eat breakfast at 7:00.Then I go to school.I have seven classes every day.Classes begin at 8:00.School is over at 4:30.After school,I often play table tennis with my friends.I eat dinner at 7:00.Then I listen to music.I do my homework at 8:00.I go to bed at 9:30.This is my day.
作文四 某人的一天Tom’s day
时态:一般现在时
重要句型:主语(第三人称单词形式)+动词第三人称单词形式+其它.
注意与My day的区别
一、主语由I 变为 He. 二、形容词性物主代词由my 变为his
三、动词由原形变为第三人称单数形式,简单记忆方法就是动词后加s或es
Tom gets up at 6:00.Then he washes his face and brushes his teeth.He eats breakfast at 7:00.Then he goes to school.He has seven classes every day.Classes begin at 8:00.School is over at 4:30.After school, he often plays table tennis with his friends.He eats dinner at 7:00.Then he listens to music.He does his homework at 8:00.He goes to bed at 9:30.This is Tom’s day.
作文五 空间类 我的卧室 My bedroom
时态:一般现在时
重要句型 :There be…..+介词词组(on,next to,behind,over,under等) It’s…. The…is on the…
注意主要物品是作为参照使用的。所以,我们一般先说bed,desk,table之类的主要物品。然后再说其它物品与其的位置关系。
I have my own room.It’s small but nice.There is a bed,a desk,a closet and a shelf.There are two end tables near the bed.The computer is on the desk.The books are on the shelf.The trash bin is behind the door.I like my bedroom.
作文六 空间类 我的屋子
时态:一般现在时
重要句型:主语+动词原形+介词词组 There be…..+介词词组。 It’s….
注意不同的房间功能是不一样的。所以我们可以说经常在哪个房间做哪些事情。
I live in a small house.It’s a small green house.In the house we have a dining room,two bedrooms,a living room and a kitchen.We watch TV in the living room.We have meals in the dining room.We sleep in the bedroom.We wash faces and have baths in the bathroom.
作文七 空间类 我的村庄/家乡 My village/hometown
时态:一般现在时
重要句型:主语+be+表语. There be…..
假设小鸟飞过时从天空上看到的主要情景,如果在农村的话,可以看到是山川河流,蓝天白云。然后才是一些具体的情景。假如在城市的话,可能看到高楼大厦公路交通甚至工厂等。
I live in a small village.It’s beautiful.The air is fresh.The water is clean.The counds are white.There are many trees and flowers.There are many fish in the rivers.I often go fishing with my parents on weekends.I like my village/hometown.
作文八 动物类 一只小狗
时态:一般现在时
主要句子结构:主语+be+形容词 It’s got…. 由于主语是第三人称单数形式,因此,大部分句子构成是 “主语+动词第三人称单数形式”
I have a pet dog.It’s cute and naughty.It’s my best friend.It’s got a black nose and a long tail.It’s got orange hair and big eyes.It likes playing with balls.I often take it out for a walk.I like it very much!
作文九 信件类
给笔友的信
1、注意邮件格式
2、自我介绍作文加信件格式.
时态:一般现在时 主语+动词原形
(注意,当写家人如父亲时,使用 主语+动词第三人称单数形式)
重要句型:主语+be+表语 I like doing sth. He likes doing sth.
例文
To: Alice @ penpal.com
From: Liu Yun @ penpal.com
Dear Alice,
I am happy to have a new pen pal. I live in China with my mom and dad.I don’t have a sister or brother.My mom is a singer.She likes swimming.My dad is a TV reporter.He likes listening to music.I like playing the violin and writing emails.
Your new friend,Liu Yu.
作文十 信件类
找路与邀请某人参加生日晚会
Dear Amy,
Please come to my twelfth birthday party at 6 pm on Saturday.Now let me tell you how to come:
1. Start from the bus stop in front of our school.
2. Take the No.17 bus.
3. Get off at the post office.
4. Walk east for three minutes.
5. Find the white building on the left.
6. Look for me near the door.
Yours, Sarah
作文十一 时态类 上周未是如何渡过的?
时态:一般过去时.
模板:I had a busy/happy/good time last weekend.On Saturday morning,I ……..Then,I …….In the afternoon,I ……On Sunday morning,I …..In the afternoon,I …..After that,I ……..
重要句型:主语+动词过去式+其它。 例文如下:
I had a good time last weekend.On Saturday morning,I got up early and then I played badminton with my mom.In the afternoon,I went swimming with my classmate.In the evening,I watched TV with my family.On Sunday morning,I went to the library.I read an interesting book.Then,I went shopping with my friend.I bought a new CD.In the evening,I did my homework.
作文十二 时态类 下周末打算怎么渡过
时态:一般将来时
重要句型:主语+be+going to do sth. 主语+be+going to 地点.
模板:I am going to have a busy/happy weekend.On Saturday morning,I’m going to….Then,…..In the evening,I….On Sunday morning,I…..In the afternoon,….In the evening……. 例文如下:
Hi,this is Liu Yun.I’m going to have a busy weekend!On Saturday,I’m going to the bookstore by subway.I’m going to buy a new CD and some story-books.Then,I’m going to go home and read the new books.On Sunday,I’m going to the supermarket with my mother.We’re going after lunch.Then,in the evening,I’m going to visit my aunt.We are going to watch TV together.That will be fun!
二 命题作文
My New English Teacher
Miss Tang is my new English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes singing and dancing. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.
My Days of the Week
I’m a student and I am in Grade 5. I get up at six o’clock every day. I have classes from Monday to Friday. On Saturday,I often play ping-pong and watch TV. On Sunday, I do my homework and read books. I like weekends very much.
My Favourite Food
Today is Wednesday. We have potatoes, pork, and green beans for dinner. Potatoes are my mother,s food. But I don,t like potatoes. I like pork. It is tasty. And I like green beans, too. It is good for me. After dinner, we eat some apples. Apples are my favourite fruit. They are healthy!
My Friend
I have a new friend. Her name is Amy. She is 12. She is beautiful. She has a round face and big eyes. She has long hair. She is tall and thin. She likes singing and dancing. Her English is very good. We are good friend!
About Me
My name is Chen jie. I am 12 years old. My favourite day is Monday. We have P.E.and computer class and we have potatoer for lunch. Potatoes are my favourite food. My favourite fruit is apple. It is good for me. Monday is a great day! My favourite teacher is Mr Li. He is our English teacher. He is tall and thin. He is very active.we all like him!
I Can Help Do Housework
I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m 11. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?
My New Room
I have my own room now. It is small and nice. There is a bed, a desk, a big closet and a shelf. There are two end tables near the bed. The computer is on the desk. The books are on the shelf. The trash bin is behind the door. The clothes are in the closet. I love my new room very much!
My Village
My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!
How Do You Go To School?
My home is far from the school. I usually go to school by bus,because it’s fast. Sometimes I go to school on foot,it’s good for me. What about you? How do you go to school ? Can you tell me, please?
My Weekend
Hi! I’m Amy. I’m going to have a busy weekend. On Saturday, I’m going to the bookstore by bike. I’m going to buy some books. In the afternoon, I’m going to play football with my friends. On Sunday morning, I’m going to do my homework. Then I’m going to clean my bedroom in the afternoon. In the evening, I’m going to watch TV . What about you ? What are you going to do on the weekend ?
My Travel Plan
The weather is good, I will have a good trip with my family. First, we are going to Beijing park by train. Then, we are going to see the Great Wall by bus. Finally,we are take the train back to Shiyan to climb Wudang Mountains. I believe,my journey will be very happy!
My Pen Pal (My New Friend)
I have a pen pal (new friend). Her name is Amy. She is 12. She is beautiful. She has a round face and big eyes. She has long hair. Amy lives in Beijing now. She goes to school on foot. She likes music very much. She often plays the violin on the weekend. Amy studies very hard. She is a good student.
My Family’s Hobby
There are 5 people in my family. I like flying kites. My father likes diving. My mother likes playing the violin. My brother likes riding a bike. My sister likes listening to music. I have a happy family.
My Family
I have a happy family. There are 3 people in my family. My father, my mother and I. My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital. He goes to work by bus. He likes diving and playing football.
My mother is a teacher. She works in a school. She goes to work on foot. She likes listening to music and playing the violin.
I’m a student. I’m 12. I go to school on foot. I like swimming and diving. I often play football with my friends on the weekend.
I have a happy family . My parents love me very much. I love them,too.
About My Family(给笔友Amy的信)
Dear Amy,
My name is Sarah. I’m 13. I’m tall and thin. I like swimming.My father is 40. He is tall and strong. He likes reading books.He is an engineer. He works in a car company.He goes to work by car.My mother is 39. She is short and thin. She likes cooking.She is a salesperson. She works in a bookstore. She goes to work on foot.
Yours,
Sarah
My School
My school is very beautiful. It is in Guicheng, near the Qiandeng Lake. Do you know it? It is Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I like my school very much.
There is a big playground in my school. We have P.E. class on the playground and we often play sports on it , too. Our teaching building has five floors. My classroom is on the fifth floor. It is big and clean. The computer rooms are on the third floor. There is a library on the second floor. There are many books in the library. I often read books here. There are some music rooms and art rooms in the teaching building, too.
The teachers in my school are very kind . The students are very polite and smart. I am happy in my school.
About Me
My name is Sarah. I’m a student. I’m 13. usually I go to school on foot. Sometimes I go by bike. I like playing football. My favourite teacher is Mr Li, he is our English teacher. I want to be an engineer in the future!
Next Week
It\\\\\\\\'s going to be Spring Festival next week.
Next Monday I am going to my cousin\\\\\\\\'s house. He lives in a village. I am going by ship. Next Tuesday I am going to have a picnic. Next Wednesday I am going to go shopping in Nanhai Plaza and to have K.F.C. Next Thursday I am going to Jihuayuan to fly kites. In the evening I am going to clean my room. Next Friday I am going to visit my uncle\\\\\\\\'s family and my grandpa. Next Saturday I am going to play football at school. Next Sunday I am going to hot spring in Kaiping.
I am going to be very happy.
My Good Friend
My name is ×××.I have a good friend . Her name is Liu Yun. She lives in China . Her mather is a singer. She likes swimming. Her father is a TV reporter. He likes listening to mnsic. Liu Yun likes piaying the violin and riding her bike. Every morning , she goes to school on foot. Every evening, she reads newspaper ai home. then she goes to bed at nine. This is my good friend Liu Yun。
My Favourite Teacher
Hello,my name is Steven. I have many good teachers, but my favourite teacher is Miss Li. SWhe is a very good teacher.
She is very young, but her English is very good. She teaches us English every day. Her class has so much fun.She sings songs with us, plays games with us. We are so happy . And we learn English well. Our English are very very good.So I like her very much.
She likes reading books and playing sports. After class, Miss Li often plays sports with us. We are very happy. We all love her very much.
This is my favourite teacher.She is a good teacher .I like my English teacher very much. What about you?Do you have a good teacher, too?
Happy Family
Everyone has a family. I have a family, too. I name it “Happy family”, because everyone in my family is happy.
Come and meet my family, please! My mother is kind. I love her, and she loves me, too. My mother is pretty. She likes beautiful clothes. I call her“Dressy Mum”. My father is a boss. He is tall and thin. He has a small head. I give him a nickname“Small Head Father”. I am fat and lovely. I have a big head. I give myself a nickname“Big Head Girl”. I study hard. I am a good student.
We are happy every day!
My Classroom
My classroom is nice and big.There are forty desks and chairs in the classroom.There are two black boards on the walls. And there are two pictures, too.My classroom has eleven lights and twelve fans. Whatcolour are the fans?They are blue. At the coner, there is ashelf,many books are in the shelf. I like the books very much.This is my classroom,it is verynice.I like my classroom very much. Do you have a nice classroom, too ?
I Love Spring Best
Winter was gone,spring comes.I love spring best,because it\\\\\\\\'s very beautiful.In spring,the weather is aways sunny and rainy,it\\\\\\\\'s not cold and not hot,it\\\\\\\\'s warmer and warmer.The flowers begin to open and the trees begin to turn green.The birds are singing in the sky,they are happy.The animals will go out to play.Many people like to go out and enjoy the sunshine.I like wearing my sweater and jeans, I like to fly kites,plant trees and see the beautiful flowers. Spring is colorful,I think it\\\\\\\\'s a wonderful season. What\\\\\\\\'s your favourite season?Please tell me.
Spring Outing
Many students are going spring outing.Some students are boating.And some students are having a picnic. The others are playing games. There is a girl siting on a chair reading a book.The sky is blue. The trees are green. The flowers are red.It\\\\\\\\'s a very beautiful park. They have a good time!
What is family ?
Everybody has his own family. What is family ? I don’t think everyone really knows. There are six letters in the word “ FAMILY ”. I think “ F ” means “father”, “A” means “and”, “ M ” means “mother” , “ I ” means“ I”, “ L” means “ love” and “ Y ” means “you”. So “ FAMILY ” is the short form of “ Father and mother , I love you.” Don’t you think so ? Father and mother love us , and we love father and mother . That’s a happy family.
My Lovely Father
I have a busy father . He works in a big office . He has a big company.
He is busy every day . He has many thing to do . He has no time to go home for lunch . He gets home at 7:00 p.m . At home he does the housework. He cooks nice dishes for mother and me .
On weekends , he often goes to the park with me .Sometimes he goes to swim with me ,too. I like to stay with my father .He is a good father , he is also a happy business man .
三 话题作文
1、根据给出的材料,写一写Mike这个周末的活动计划。
Saturday |
Sunday |
read a magazine go to the zoo |
buy a book learn Kungfu watch TV |
Mike is a student. He is my good friend. He is busy at the weekend. He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning. He is going to learn Kungfu this Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening.
2、根据下面提供的内容,写一篇英语短文。要求语句通顺,条理清楚,字数不少于50个单词。
Mary 是个英国女孩,五年级学生,十二岁。她向别人自我介绍,并介绍她的家庭。她有个双胞胎姐姐,爸爸是医生,妈妈是老师,她非常爱他们,他们也很爱她。
My name is Mary. I come from England. I am an English girl. I am a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my English teacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me, too.
3、题目: My net friend(我的网友)
要求:(一)条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,书写清晰、规范;
(二)要将提示词全部体现在作文中;不得少于50个单词。
提示词:(1)computer (2)net friend (3) talk with each other(互相交谈)(4) in the chat room (在聊天室) (5)talk in English (用英语交谈) (6)good now
My net friend
I am Tony. I have a computer. I have a new friend. His name is Jack. He is 12 years old. He is a student. He likes surfing the net. We often talk with each other in the chat room. We talk in English. My English is good now. He is a good boy. I like him very much. Do you want to have a net friend?
4、根据给出的提示和要求,写一篇65个单词左右的短文。要求:写一封介绍你一家的电子邮件给Jay。
Hello, Jay,
I am very happy to be your net friend. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my sister and I. My father is the oldest and the tallest. He can drive a car. He is a doctor. My mother is a factory worker. She works hard. My sister is a student. She is the best in her class. My hobby is playing basketball. My sister and I go to school on foot. I have a happy family. What about you?
Bye- bye,
Benson
5、根据提示,从表格中获取信息写一篇不少于60个单词的小作文,要求提示的内容要全部体现在作文中。
Name |
Zhang Ping |
Jim |
Age 年龄 |
12 |
15 |
Height 身高 |
150cm |
162cm |
Weight 体重 |
50kg |
60kg |
Nationality 国籍 |
Chinese |
Canadian |
Address 地址 |
Xinhui |
Guangzhou |
Favorite Color 最喜欢的颜色 |
red |
blue |
Favorite Sport最喜欢的运动 |
badminton |
swimming |
My Friends
I have two good friends. They’re Zhang Ping and Jim. Zhang Ping is 12. Jim is three years older than her. He’s 15. Jim is heavier than Zhang Ping. He’s 60 kilograms. Jim is taller than her. He’s 162cm. Zhang Ping is a Chinese girl. She lives in Xinhui. Jim is a Canadian boy. He lives in Guangzhou now. Zhang Ping likes red. Her favorite sport is badminton. Jim likes blue. His favorite sport is swimming. I like them very much.
6、描写你的周末生活,注意用一般现在时。
My Weekend
I have happy weekend.
On Saturday morning I always have English classes at school. I study hard in the classroom. In the afternoon I often play computer games. On Sunday morning I often draw pictures. Sometimes I visit my grandmother and grandfather. Sometimes I listen to music. On Sunday afternoon I often do housework or go shopping.
So I love weekends.
7、Jack 昨天跟他妈妈买东西,请根据下表的信息,写一篇不少于60个单词的小作文。
Happy Shop:Some pieces of candy ¥4 A roll of toilet paper ¥5
Mr. Chen’s Store:A carton of ice cream¥15
Uncle Eddy’s Store:A bottle of shampoo¥45 A pair of socks¥8
Big Blue Department Store:A bag of chips ¥9 Toy car ¥105
Yesterday was Jack’s shopping day. He went shopping with his mother.
They went to the Happy Shop. They bought some pieces of candy. They are 4 Yuan. They bought a roll of toilet paper. They bought a carton of ice cream at Mr. Chen’s Store .They bought a bottle of shampoo and a pair of socks at Uncle Eddy’s Store. They went to the Big Blue Department Store. They bought a toy car. It’s 105 Yuan. They were very happy.
8、昨天是3月20日,也是你的生日,请描写你的生日派对,注意用一般过去时。
My birthday
Yesterday was March 20th. It was my birthday. I had a party. I ate too much. Mike brought a carton of ice cream. Jenny brought some candy. Mary brought a lot of cookies. My mom made a cake. My dad bought a toy car for me. I was very happy. At the party we sang and danced. We had a good time.
9、根据下面提供的信息,写一篇60字左右的作文。
Name:Bill Age: 13 Favorite sports: tennis, soccer, basketball Clothes: black, T-shirt, blue pants Phone number: 5352375 |
My Friend
I have a good friend. We are in the same class. His name is Bill. He is 13. He likes sports very much. These sports are tennis, soccer and basketball. He plays tennis twice a week. He plays soccer twice a week. He plays basketball once a week. He often likes to wear black T-shirt and blue pants. His phone number is 5352375. Everyone likes him.
10、写一个你最喜爱的人,请对他/她进行一定的外貌描写。
My Favorite People
Who is your favorite person? My favorite person is my mother. She is beautiful. She is 38 years old. She is tall and thin. She has big eyes and long hair. She likes cooking. She cooks good meals for us every day. And she always does all the housework. She looks after my father and me. I love my mother very much.
11、请描写一下你的房间,注意要使用“there be ”句型。
My Bedroom
I have a nice and small bedroom. There is a beautiful bed and two small chairs. I also have a big and tall closet because I have many clothes. There is a big desk next to the window. I always do my homework at the desk. There is a family photo on the wall. We took this photo this summer holiday. I like my bedroom.
12、描写一种你最喜爱的动物,要对它进行外形描写。
My Favorite Animal
My favorite animal is rabbit. Its name is Sweet. Sweet has long ears. It’s very small. It’s white. It has a short tail. It has red eyes. It likes eating carrots. It likes jumping. It goes jumping three times a day. I like it very much. It’s lovely. It’s my best friend. I like the rabbit.
13、同学们,你一定有很多的爱好,请你写一个你的爱好,字数不少于60个单词。
My hobby
My hobby is collecting stamps(集邮). There are many stamps in my room. I like stamps very much. There are many things on the stamps. They are colorful and beautiful. After school I usually go to the post office and there are many people there. I learn a lot from collecting stamps. I like collecting stamps very much.
14、寒假很快就要到了,请你为你的寒假写一个计划。快点把你的计划写出来吧!
My Winter Holiday
It’s January. My winter holiday is coming. I am going to go to Thailand. I will go there by plane. I like the food in Thailand. It’s spicy and tasty. In the winter holiday, I am going to play basketball. I am going to paint pictures, too. I will help my mother do some housework. I will be very happy in my winter holiday.
15、假设Jack 是10岁,短发,1.5m, 50kg; 而May 是12岁,长发,1.6m,45kg。请运用学过的句型介绍和比较一下他们的特征。
Jack and May
I have two good friends. They are Jack and May. He is ten. He has short hair. He is 50kg now. And May is a beautiful girl. She has long hair. She is two years older than Jack. She is 12 now. She is taller than Jack. She is 1.6m. But Jack is heavier than May. May is 45kg. They are lovely students. I like them.
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