2024高考英语作文真题及优秀范文（全国甲卷）

 

2024全国甲卷高考英语作文真题及优秀范文

【作文真题】

英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。

 

注意:

1. 词数 100 左右;

2. 题目和首句已为你写好。

Development of Transport in China

From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.

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【优秀范文】

Development of Transport in China

From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.

Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.

In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.

【作文解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。

【词汇积累】

提供：offer→provide

极大地：dramatically→tremendously

减少：reduce→decrease

总之：in short→in a nutshell

【句式拓展】

简单句变复合句

原句：Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips.

拓展句：Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility.

【高分句型1】

Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)

【高分句型2】

These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句)